Revised Story

Chad Myers 

Wally Goes to Hawaii
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There once was a town called FrostBerg, located on an iceberg somewhere between the North and South Pole. It is a beautiful Winter day there. 
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The penguins are outside skating. Polar bears are enjoying their ICEEs and narwhales are skiing down the various slopes.
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There is only one animal not joining in on their Winter fun: Wally the Walrus.
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Wally has never liked the cold. He prefers to go home to his igloo and relax in his bundle of blankets reading a good book.
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He enjoyed being able to water plants in his green house. The ice and snow just wasn't the life for him, trust me, he tried.
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Sledding was never really his thing. He'd always scream on the way down.
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Peppermint mochas just burned his tongue.
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Snow kept getting caught in his mustache. It would make his lip cold.
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Eventually, the animals of Frostberg stopped inviting him to play. He just couldn't be part of their Winter fun.
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One day, he meet with Morris the Moose, Frostberg's local travel agent. Wally meet with him to discuss where he would like to go this year.
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"Where would you like to travel?" Morris the Moose asked.
"Where can I go?" 
"Anywhere, from the highest peaks to the lowest of trenches. Anything particular in mind?"
"Just someplace warm." Wally replied. He hates the Winter weather of his hometown. 
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"I think I have just the place in mind." the agent replied with a smile.
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When Wally stepped off the plane, it was like an whole new world was opened up to him. There were palm trees and beaches everywhere.
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He went to his new hut on the beach, and laid in his hammock sunbathing. He pulled out his map, and decided to explore the island.
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He took a walk on one of the trials, and found that Hawaii had plants he had never gotten to see in the Artic! The entire island was covered in the brightly colored tropical fruits.
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At the end of the trial were several shops that scattered the beach. One vendor offered him a mango-pineapple smoothie. He didn't really know what either of those things were, but he was open to trying anything (but peppermint mochas, those are gross).
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He was surprised to find that he liked it! It was very sweet, and was different from anything that he had tried at home.
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He went up to the local surf shop, and bought a surfboard. He ended up getting to try some free surfinglessons. At first, he stumbled, but he quickly improved.
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Eventually, he was surfing like one of the pros. He shredded some sick waves until the sun went down.
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There was a luau on the beach that night. The place was lit up with hundreds of lights, and he could hear music all the way from the ocean. 
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He decided to join them. Apparently, Wally is quiet the life of the party, and he is crazy good at limbo. 
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Once the night was done, Wally came back to his hut and got some much needed rest. He had such a busy day, and was looking forward to the rest of his trip.
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Before Wally knew it, his stay in Hawaii was over. He had to say goodbye to his newfound friends, but it was time for him to go home.
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Wally realized where his home was, and realized he'd be back sooner than he thought.

THE END